You were able to successfuly accomplish the main objective of the assignment which is to organize a large block of information into logical groups. However, as a designer, you were lazy with attention to details, particularly in spelling and proof reading. In the first composition, you changed cats to cat, and did not capitalize Street and City. On both compositions, you did not double check the website address, which should have read "radiocity.com" rather than as you have it. In the second composition alone, you change "Hep" to "Help". As far as visual composition are concerned, both are quite successful, however in the second, the title of the event might be more prominent and you might consider that Johnny Greaser and the Hep Cats... is one entity and should be treated as one. Good job overall. Design is in the details. Be careful.
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You were able to successfuly accomplish the main objective of the assignment which is to organize a large block of information into logical groups. However, as a designer, you were lazy with attention to details, particularly in spelling and proof reading. In the first composition, you changed cats to cat, and did not capitalize Street and City. On both compositions, you did not double check the website address, which should have read "radiocity.com" rather than as you have it. In the second composition alone, you change "Hep" to "Help". As far as visual composition are concerned, both are quite successful, however in the second, the title of the event might be more prominent and you might consider that Johnny Greaser and the Hep Cats... is one entity and should be treated as one. Good job overall. Design is in the details. Be careful.
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